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💡 Example Editing & Proofreading Services
🔹 Basic Proofreading – “Business Report” 📊
📌 Before:
“The companys strategy is focused on increasing sale’s and reducing expenses, however, there are issues with customers retention.”
📌 After:
“The company’s strategy focuses on increasing sales and reducing expenses; however, there are issues with customer retention.”
✅ Fixes: Grammar, punctuation, possessives, and clarity.
🔹 Copy Editing – “Marketing Blog Post” 📢
📌 Before:
“This new AI tool help business grow faster then ever before. It’s machine learning capabilities are state-of-the-art and will automatize many processes!”
📌 After:
“This new AI tool helps businesses grow faster than ever. Its machine learning capabilities are state-of-the-art and will automate many processes!”
✅ Fixes: Subject-verb agreement, comparative structure, word choice, and fluency.
🔹 Structural Editing – “Book Excerpt” 📚
📌 Before:
“She ran quickly down the dark alley, her breath heavy. It was quiet, too quiet, and she felt fear rise in her chest. Was she being followed? She couldn’t tell, but she knew she had to keep moving.”
📌 After:
“She sprinted down the dark alley, her breath ragged. The silence was suffocating. Too quiet. A chill ran down her spine—was someone behind her? She couldn’t be sure, but she had no time to stop.”
✅ Fixes: Improved pacing, stronger word choice, more engaging storytelling.
🔹 Academic Editing – “Thesis Abstract” 🎓
📌 Before:
“The study examines how social media impact mental health of teenagers. The methodology includes surveys and qualitative data to analyze effect on anxiety and self-esteem.”
📌 After:
“This study examines the impact of social media on teenagers’ mental health. The methodology includes surveys and qualitative data analysis to assess its effects on anxiety and self-esteem.”
✅ Fixes: Academic tone, proper noun-verb agreement, clarity.